Flamey
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Post by Flamey on Jul 31, 2010 17:53:31 GMT -5
Well I made this two years ago so now I will revamp it but keep the similar series of events~ Enjoy! -Flamey
Plot There was already four groups at the lake:Thunderclan,Windclan,Riverclan, and Shadowclan. The stories of the caves and tunnels found intersecting between Windclan and Thunderclan territories still exist. The story is passed on to every kit that is born, and soon many moons passed and the memory of the tunnels are starting to fade away. But a group of rogues,kittypets, stray tribe cats and the like have gathered, and plan to make their home in these tunnels, where their ancestors had came from. The other clans are not pleased,many traitors are aroused. But Stoneclan is new, and weak...
Cats of the Clan Leader Stonestar=Massive dark gray tom with green eyes Deputy Silverclaw=Handsome silver tabby with amber eyes Shamans None Elders None Warriors Frostpath=Pretty almost-white she-cat with blue eyes Blackfeather=Black tom with brown eyes Hawkclaw=Sturdy tabby tom with green eyes Skyclaw=White middle-aged tom with brown eyes Queens Poppyheart=White-and-ginger she-cat with green eyes Kits=Yellowkit,Frogkit,Batkit Apprentices Rainpaw=A gray she-cat with light blue eyes Kits Yellowkit=A cream-pelted she-cat with yellow eyes Frogkit=Black pelted tom with green eyes Batkit=Silver tabby she-cat with green eyes
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Flamey
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Post by Flamey on Jul 31, 2010 18:17:03 GMT -5
The moon rose higher as Stonestar led the cats through the dark bushes.Silverclaw opened his jaws slightly to let the warm scents of the trees drift into his scent glands,along with the smell of the cool and refreshing air.He wished his fur was longer to keep out the cold night air.The overwhelming scents of cats overpowered the musty scents of the foliage,but Stonestar only paused and continued forward."We must go through the cat's territory to reach our home.Its not much further.We can hunt as we wish and sleep warmly in our beds once we pass through the clan's territory. From the tall pines and the muddy ground, I guess this is Shadowclan." Silverclaw nodded,confident that this was the only way for the new clan to survive.Many moons ago they had heard rumors of underground tunnels in the middle of the four clans of ferocious cats that resided beside the lake.And the small group had decided that it had to be where their ancestors came from. He looked back to see the small clan struggling to keep up as they helped the pregnant queen,Poppyheart along.Her breaths were short,but she kept insisting that she and her unborn kits could manage on their own. Stonestar waited for them to catch up and catch their breath before stepping over the strong scent mark that announced the beginning of Shadowclan territory.
They quickly made their way across the muddy terrain.Silverclaw lifted his jaws to taste the air again.Cats!The scent was approaching closer."Stonestar!"He hissed,but the leader was already signaling the cats to hide in the only nearby clump of foliage.Silverclaw picked up yowls of alarmed cats.The patrol had definitely picked up their scent."Silverclaw,Skyclaw,up here with me.The rest,stay hidden."He heard his leader order.The three cats stood,waiting,while the footsteps sounded closer. In a blink of an eye four Shadowclan cats had them surrounded before either one of the three Stoneclan cats could react. These cats were skilled, and this was their home.A black and white young tom unsheathed his claws,neck fur rising."Why are you intruding on Shadowclan territory?Stealing prey,I expect?"The cat spat on the ground.A muscular golden tom broke in before they could answer."Shadefoot, thats enough.Don't waste words on these...Rogues.We must chase them out of our territory.Whitestar will hear about this."Silverclaw felt his own fur rise."Rogues?And why would we steal your prey?Nothing but mud and needles around here,I heard you were crowfood eaters."He fell silent when Stonestar lashed his tail at him."We are just passing through.Let us by and there will be no fight."
The cat named Shadefoot spat on the ground in fury."Who are you,telling us to let you pass through our own territory?Goldenheart,do something!"The golden tom,Goldenheart flicked his tail calmly, but it was obvious the large tom was angry."No rogues shall pass! Leave now,or prepare for a fight."He unsheathed his long black claws,proving his point.Stonestar didn't flinch from the large cat."If you will not let Stoneclan pass,then so be it."He unsheathed his claws. Silverclaw and Whiteclaw did the same.Startled gasps broke out among the patrol."Stoneclan?"A tabby warrior spat."We don't need another filthy clan!"He lunged at Silverclaw,paws extended and his teeth bared.The tabby knocked Silverclaw to his back,sinking his teeth in his shoulder.Silverclaw yowled with fury,raking his claws against the tabby's belly and then kicking him off as he loosened his grip.The tabby swiped his claws at his chest.Anger gave him strength as he saw the scarlet beads of blood.He heard caterwauls and realized that Stonestar and Whiteclaw were wrestling with their own foes.
Silverclaw lunged at his enemy,digging his teeth into his neck until he screeched and yowled for mercy.Only then did he let him go,giving him a sharp nip on his tail.He assumed that he was going back to his camp to send out reinforcements.He didn't have time to worry about that when a small cat,by the looks of her a apprentice,barreled into his side,claws raking.He whirled around,and rolled.The apprentice jumped back,and looked brave but hesitant.He took the opportunity to latch on to her neck,then tossed her heavily against a tree trunk.The cat shrieked at the impact and bolted into cover.He looked around.Stonestar had the cat Goldenheart pinned,they were both bleeding from numerous wounds.Shadefoot's shoulder was raked as he attempted to get free.Whiteclaw tossed him away. Goldenheart struggled.Stonestar hissed."Go.Tell your leader that Stoneclan has risen,and that there will be peace if you keep to your borders."Goldenclaw bolted and regrouped with Shadefoot as he was released.He turned back and snarled,"The forest belongs to only four clans!You will be driven out!" And disappeared into the shadows once more. ---
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Post by Rye on Aug 4, 2010 9:16:29 GMT -5
Looks interesting!:DI will read soon,for sure!
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Post by Rye on Aug 4, 2010 9:45:42 GMT -5
I read it,wonderful!More!
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