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Post by Spotty001 on Jun 1, 2011 16:37:32 GMT -5
In a Dream
From a dream, love lights up a dreamy night sky. From a dream, the sands of time seem to cease. From a dream, the warm desert air leaves me at peace. From a dream, I don’t know anyone who could lie.
Here in a dream, war does not exist. Here in a dream, nothing really matters. Here in a dream, lives never shatter. Here in a dream, there’s very little amiss.
In my dream, I wasn’t haunted by a mere memory of you. In my dream, there was no such thing as loss and pain. In my dream, nothing I did was ever in vain. In my dream, I knew for sure there was nothing I couldn’t do.
Because of our dream - I can’t tell where we’ll go from here, But because of our dream - I can tell there’s nothing more to fear.
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Post by Darkreign on Jun 1, 2011 17:05:41 GMT -5
I love this!! This can be pictured epically, heroically, or just plain wishful.
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Post by Rye on Jun 1, 2011 18:02:51 GMT -5
Okay,this was awesomeness. It sort of put me to peace when I read it,it was relaxing.
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Post by Spotty001 on Jun 1, 2011 18:25:51 GMT -5
yeah, I wrote all these in Creative Writing class. Stories I sometimes have trouble with, but I just pick a topic, and the lines spew out.
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Post by Dawn on Jun 1, 2011 21:49:38 GMT -5
That was amazing. I can't write poetry to save my life, so reading this was like watching a magic show...if you get my horrible analogy...
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Post by Spotty001 on Jun 1, 2011 22:29:25 GMT -5
haha, I get it. For some reason I get so stuck on stories, yet poetry just writes itself. Maybe it has to do with experiences of life and emotion, who knows... Thanks, btw
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Post by Dawn on Jun 1, 2011 22:33:08 GMT -5
No problem. I'm the exact opposite. I can't type fast enough to get all my ideas down when I'm writing a story, but when I try poetry I'm fresh out of creative juices.
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Post by Spotty001 on Jun 1, 2011 22:35:37 GMT -5
haha, it'll come, dont' worry about it. And even if it never develops, there's always something else to excel in. For example, I recently discovered that I'm a helluva lot better at sketching with paint in my photoshop than actually doing it by hand. I've been drawing ever since i was little, and now 18 years later, I find out, hey, why the heck didn't I think of this before?
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Post by Dawn on Jun 1, 2011 22:40:50 GMT -5
Wow, it's like our lives are going in reverse or something...I found out two weeks ago that I'm better at sketching by hand than with photoshop. And I've been drawing with photoshop since I was 11.
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Post by Spotty001 on Jun 2, 2011 10:58:20 GMT -5
haha, yeah, wow that's really interesting. Freaky, really...
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Post by Dawn on Jun 2, 2011 14:50:58 GMT -5
Yeah, no kidding...
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